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Six Tips For Winning Story Contests  by John Yeoman

How do you win a creative writing contest? More important, from the judge's point of view, how do you judge one? Those were the questions I put to myself when I set up a short fiction contest in 2009. I devised a seven-point rating system, which, I suspect, is similar to that used by most reputable judges. I allocated points out of a total of 45.

Entrants who follow these rules will stand an excellent chance of winning a prize in any fiction contest.

1. Emotionally engage your reader

A maximum of ten points went to the stories which engaged me emotionally throughout. I read many entries that were impressively clever. They danced with ingenuity, wit or wordplay. But they were cerebral exercises, not stories.

2. Write with originality

I then awarded up to ten points for a story's originality. True, there are just 36 story plots or themes, according to Georges Polti (1916), but there's always room for a new twist on Cinderella, Bluebeard's cupboard or Romeo and Juliet. Point is, the twist had to be fresh.

3. Imbue your first paragraph with power

The quality of the first paragraph gained a further maximum of eight points. Did it compel me to read on? I was seriously underwhelmed by shock openings along the lines of 'I pulled the trigger. The punk fell dead'. Yawn! What gained my vote instead was the intrigue or enchantment of the opening lines. My top three winning entries glittered with magic.

4. Retain a sense of form

Another eight points in total were allocated for the story's sense of form. It had to show a coherent progression and a satisfying conclusion. Many a fine story lacks 'closure', of course. It may leave the reader with untidy loose ends or an unresolved mystery. It might even appear, at first glance, to be a collection of vivid but disjointed impressions (Joyce's Ulysses comes to mind.)

But the story still had to be rigorous in its construction. I had to feel: nothing could usefully have been added to it or cut. It's a 'whole'.

5. Avoid using cliches

I then allotted up to six points for the originality of the language. A story did not need to dance with spry metaphors or turn somersaults in its syntax. But cliches and other lazy expressions were a no, no.

6. Remember grammar and punctuation

A final three points were given for the professionalism of the presentation. I had no problems with the odd misspelling or typing error. But I did shudder at the systematic misuse of apostrophes!

My top three winners fell into the 35-40 points bracket. The ten runner up winners gained 30-35 points. These tips should help any entrant win better prizes in any fiction contest.

About the Author:
John Yeoman is founder of the Writers' Village short fiction contest. A PhD in Creative Writing, he lectures at a UK university. He is the author of eight works of humour and has been a successful commercial writer for 40 years. To download a free 7000-word minibook 'How to Win Writing Contests for Profit', packed with further practical tips, go to:
http://tinyurl.com/contest-tips