The weather is so much more than how wet you're getting. It's amazing how many writers
overlook the weather as a useful tool in both setting and also in telling the story.
Many years ago, we relied on the weather and took it seriously. Poor weather
affected crops and livestock. Bad weather would even affect health - be it through famine
or disease.
Nowadays we have supermarkets that will fly in food from around the world and
central heating and air conditioning to ensure that whatever is happening outside, we
don't need to vary the climate inside our home.
But it's deeper than that. Seasons reflect aspects of life and weather can be a great
barometer (pun intended) for emotions.
In reality, we all react slightly differently to the weather. Some love the heat and
others despise it. Even considering these variances, the majority of people will react
similarly to most climactic conditions.
The English language is littered with idioms that reference the season or the
specific weather. They don't need explaining; we all understand exactly what people
mean when they use one. That's because they are understood as a subconscious level.
Even the most basic of weather descriptions convey a mood:
Spring = hope, new birth
Summer = adulthood, happiness
Autumn = preparing for old age
Winter = death
Sunshine = happiness, goodness
Storm = trouble, a change
Calm before the storm = trouble or a change ahead
Rainbow = hope, a link between two extremes (sun and rain)
Cloudy = confused, muddled, unclear
Clouds on horizon = trouble ahead
No wind = no change
Windy = changes
Rough weather = problems
Fog = confusion, unaware
Rain = depressed, badness
Snow = coldness, cleansing
This makes weather an ideal setting tool to convey what's going on in the story or in
a character's head.
You don't need to use the sledgehammer approach but I'd also exercise caution at
being too clever. A few references, subtle ones, dropped in during a scene will convey the
message.
As an example, if you used the rain as a portent for something bad about to happen,
don't have the character thinking, 'It's starting to rain and rain is a bad thing.'
Instead, reference the changing light - from bright to muted grey tones. You could
even describe the rain, or its effect as resembling something inherently evil. The use of
metaphors and weather work well.
Mention the noise that the rain brings; reference something having to stop because
of the weather. Consider how inanimate objects react to the weather - or even how the
characters change.
How does the rain affect textures? How does it change how things sound? Does its
own noise drown out something the character was listening to? Does it simply stop
whatever was making a noise? Does it therefore bring silence?
How does it affect the character's senses? Does it affect what they're doing? And be
subtle here - does it affect their mood?
Remember to build the mood; don't dunk the reader in it. Sometimes a sudden
change in mood is necessary and an equally sudden change in weather is appropriate but
this is likely to be the exception to the rule.
Sometimes the change, or even the manner of the change, is as important as the
weather itself.
Let the reader join the dots. If you've positioned them well enough, they'll get the
picture. You don't need to go over them with a wax crayon to convey the message.
Finally, never forget that setting is an integral part of writing a novel. Despite this,
the use of weather is just one tool to set the scene - not your only one.
About the Author:
Mark Walton is the author of 46 Ways to Improve Your Plotting, a self-help guide
for writers. If you want to improve your chances of getting a story published then visit
http://www.betternovelwriting.com/Plotting.htm and see how quickly and easily your
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