Keeping the reader engaged and immersed in a story is the aim of every writer. The answer is to give the reader what he or she craves for, which is conflict. They want the hero to be presented with problems, cliffhangers, highs and lows, and a satisfying outcome at the end of it all.

Conflict does not always imply physical disagreements leading to fisticuffs, although it certainly can be this. Writers like Dick Francis and Ian Fleming offer this kind of action in spades. But they also have other types of conflict, sometimes quite subtle, which the writers bring to the mix.

Conflict can be conflict of purpose, conflict of ideologies, conflict in social standing and, of course, the inner conflict where the character is torn between two courses of action which they have to wrestle with and decide upon.

The most significant conflict is often placed towards the beginning of the story. This immediately captures your reader's attention as he avidly follows the hero working through the problem until he emerges into the light at the end of the dark and desperate tunnel.

If you are writing a novel there should be a series of problems or conflicts that the hero or heroine has to work through, thus keeping the reader on the edge of his seat eager to know how they are going to extricate themselves. For a short story you may want to limit the amount of conflict situations you introduce or you may bring your readers out in a sweat as they desperately struggle to understand what on earth is going on. In almost every case, for a short story less is more.

Use conflict to show what kind of people your story is populated with. You can explore the inner depths, strengths and weaknesses they have and show how they react in various ways to the problems. In fact you can produce a conflict out of the attitude or flaws of one of your characters and then describe how he and your other characters deal with that.

It is true that most conflict situations involve differences between people, but it can be used in other ways. Perhaps your heroine is stranded in some deserted area which she has to find her way out of, or maybe your hero is adrift in a dinghy surrounded by sharks. How do they battle against all the odds and win through?

Don't be afraid to confront your characters with conflict after conflict. This will develop them as believable people and show the reader what they're made of. But have a heart. Give the poor things a little respite between each bout of problems so that both they and the reader can catch their breath before tackling the next one.


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Ruth Barringham is a freelance writer, author and publisher. at http://writeaholics.net/. The above article is an extract from her free eBook "Become a Freelance Writing Success" which you can download instantly when you subscribe to her free monthly newsletter for writers.